Could you please check for grammatical errors in this small essay.? thats the link to it its a descriptive essay about walmart which is sarcasticly my favorite place I would appreciate any help my teacher says its okay to get others to look over it so this isn't cheating. Thanks barrett note the link is dynamic i am changing the essay as i get revision help so dont get confused when people have written about errors that are non existent because I probally revised them

Asked By: Barrett R - 10/22/2007
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For the first sentence, "My favorite place is Wal-mart because it has a little bit of everything there... More
Answered By: Jackie - 10/23/2007
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There are 29 gramatical errors in the essay
Answered By: . - 10/22/2007
it needs to be edited.
Answered By: rusty - 10/22/2007
se things in one stop. Because of this Walmart Make this one sentence and combine the first sentence with the second Good Luck!♥
Answered By: Amber - 10/22/2007
I suggest using the word Wal-Mart less. The last sentence in the first paragraph should have a question mark at the end. Other than that, it's a great paper. I liked it.
Answered By: Jonas Brothers Lover - 10/22/2007
My favorite place is Walmart. Walmart is my favorite place because it has a little bit of everything there... More
Answered By: seven11grll - 10/22/2007
Too many Walmarts! Hope you get an A+!!
Answered By: Abzterz likes cows! - 10/22/2007
things i know... More
Answered By: Andrea - 10/22/2007
Wal-mart is a hyphenated word. There needs to be a comma after "turkey call." "D" in deli needs to lower case... More
Answered By: lvs2dance280 - 10/22/2007
My favorite place is Walmart. Walmart is my favorite place because it has a little bit of everything there. If I wanted to buy milk, a music CD, and a turkey-call I think Walmart would be the only place I could get all of these things in one stop. Because of this, Walmart is very convenient... More
Answered By: Mickey Lindsay - 10/22/2007
Third paragraph, first line ~ 'their' should be ' there' I don't thinki can spot anything else. Well written. You have just sold me Walmart !! lol
Answered By: Giselle - 10/22/2007
-try writing walmart less... More
Answered By: Kirsten __ x - 10/22/2007
Here, I fixed a few sentences and worked on spelling... More
Answered By: Sprinkles - 10/22/2007
My favorite store is 'Walmart', because it has just about everything there. If I wanted to buy milk, a music CD, and a turkey call, I believe that a 'Walmart' store is the only place to go to get all of these things in one stop... More
Answered By: Norrie - 10/22/2007
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