10 points Please double check my grammar. English is my second language. ?
1.)Hard working and diligent My accomplishment in the United States proved I am a hard worker who motivate to get a job done effective and efficiently. I studied and worked in the United States for over 6 years. I maintained high GPA while worked 30-40 hours per week and contributed to many groups and organization both Thai and American communities. I received various recognition and rewards from being a hard working and diligent. I am proud of my character and its result. I am a hard worker and will always be a hard worker. 2.)Ambitious and goal-oriented I have always been motivated by my desire to be successful. I set a goal and work diligently to reach my goal. In college, I studied hard, completed all my assignment on time, and never missed a class. I earned Master’s degree at age 22. At work, I worked hard to get a job done perfectly. I constantly attended professional development trainings to gain knowledge, skills, and experience. I always received rewords and recognition from my employers. I truly believe my ambitious play a significant role in my today accomplishment. 3.)Reliable My American supervisor always says, “Hope is my favorite worker because she has impeccable character and is a dependable worker”. I enjoy receiving a good feedback from supervisor, co-workers, and subordinates. I am a great worker because I want to get the job done right and always do my best to increase organization’s productivity. 4.)Fast learner I was always assigned to attend conferences, professional trainings, and seminars and asked to train my co-workers and subordinates because my supervisors believed I am a fast learner who can process and deliver information quickly and efficiently. Being a fast leaner help me to complete assignments quickly and able to help others. 5.)Professionalism My work experience from the Royal Thai Embassy and American Companies taught me the important of professionalism. I know my demeanor reflects on my organization and I want people’s impressions of me to always be positive for that reason. I am dressed in professional attire daily, and I always try to be helpful to supervisors, co-workers, subordinates, and clients.
Asked By: Hope - 8/19/2008
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Answered By: Matthew David - 8/19/2008
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100% perfect. Good work :-) & good luck. But write the numbers in words. eg. 22.. should be ... Twenty two.. :-)
Answered By: Deliiciious® - 8/19/2008
Sorry it is too long for me to go through, I am on holidays
Answered By: macca3477 - 8/19/2008
sure looks good
Answered By: Andrew - 8/19/2008
If you want to follow the correct English way of writing, don't use numbers in your paragraphs, you have to spell the numbers out.
Answered By: Nicole F - 8/19/2008
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Answered By: awesum14peace - 8/19/2008
In my opinion, this sounds great! You completed your master's at 22? How did you manage to do that?
Answered By: baby bambi - 8/19/2008
a hard worker who motivate to... More
Answered By: brookelle<3 - 8/19/2008
My accomplishment in the United States proved I am a hard worker who is motivated to get a job done effectively and efficiently. I studied and worked in the United States for over 6 years. I maintained high GPA while working 30-40 hours per week and contributed to many groups and organizations, both Thai and American... More
Answered By: dyme1029 - 8/19/2008
Here is a revised version: (I would hire you. sounds great... More
Answered By: Elsa L - 8/19/2008
i fixed what i could, there were a few minor changes because you switched back and forth from past and present tenses, good luck with everything. and I thank you for everything you have done in the United States... More
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