Need your opinion about my child care worker resume?

I am applying for a job at a day care center and this is my job objective that I have written in my resume. I just need your opinion guys, oh and suggestions, grammar checks are very welcome :) well here it is... OBJECTIVE Energetic caregiver with the ability to relate well to children of all ages and well rounded in aspects of a child's growth and development, desires a position utilizing child care.

Asked By: cute_asian_girl - 11/4/2008
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Answered By: Im Angel baby Rihana due 12/11 - 11/7/2008
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you did a great job! i am opening a preschool in may and if i seen that on a resume, i would be impressed.
Answered By: Rebecca G - 11/4/2008
I don't know if I quite understand "...desires a position utilizing child care." It seems more appropriate if you say "desires a position utilizing these skills in a child care setting." Every thing else sounds great, though!
Answered By: daqulynn - 11/4/2008
You probably shouldn't have added "desires a position utilizing child care" because it makes you seem desprate. Other than that, you did fantastic!
Answered By: I <3 TENNIS!!!! - 11/4/2008
Okay, so I took what you said and tweaked it a little bit. I think you will come across as more conifident and put together this way... More
Answered By: jason's mommy - 11/4/2008
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