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Major help needed!! Plot, characters, comments, etc. Anything is accepted!?

Hi. I'm writing a story and I need some help with the plot.Everything that I've written down underneath here is leading UP to the main problem, which is what I need help with. I also need help with names for my characters. I'm thinking that I would like classic names with my main character. Thanks! -Girl -Has no mom -> died in a car crash -Lives with dad in a suburban city, dad is rich -Girl is average at everything (or so she thinks) +actually a prodigy at the piano -Dad gets a girlfriend +gets married soon after meeting the woman -Step mom is mean +has a snobby daughter, same age as girl +daughter turns out to be extremely popular (girl is not insanely popular, has like 2 or 3 friends) -Girl is jealous of daughter +girl has never been jealous of anybody before -Daughter becomes boyfriend of girl's only crush from elementary school -Girl somehow loses her friendships at school(need help with this, any ideas?) -Girl makes a new friend at school +new friend (boy) has her join his band -Boy is the lead singer +his band needs a pianist -Girl starts to have a crush on him +Become best friends -Daughter breaks up with current boyfriend -Girl and band compose music together -Girl's musical group go to play a concert for their newly released album -Dad won't let girl go to concert because of step mom (i need ideas for what the step mom says or does that makes the dad not let the girl go) +Dad then secretly gave the girl tickets to fly to the concert -Band has great time +girl and lead singer become very close -Girl comes home and daughter is very, very jealous (what can the daughter do to express her jealously?) -Prom is in two weeks +lead vocalist asks girl to it. +girl accepts -Girl is excited for prom +very unusual that girl is very excited for something +dad is happy that girl is having a good time -Prom comes +girl goes with lead singer -During prom, girl loses track of lead singer +finds him and daughter flirting in the back OR kissing in the back (which one?) -Girl is upset that lead singer cheated +girl is mad at daughter, lead singer, and friends(friends did something mean to girl while she was gone to the concert. what could they have done?) Now I need some help with the MAIN problem.... I want it to be something that the lead singer solves and the girl forgives him for cheating, so the problem has to be something very important, like a tragedy or something. And something has to happen with the daughter and the step mom, like divorce... I don't know, something that can get them out of their life right now, but like maybe in a sequel there's a problem and they come back as very mean and bad or something. Thanks for all the help!!!

Asked By: Silyvanilly - 11/27/2008
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Ok, first of all, you need names... More
Answered By: Why do you care what my name is? - 11/27/2008
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1.Girl somehow loses her friendships at school(need help with this, any ideas... More
Answered By: hogwartstudent01 - 11/27/2008
 
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