Can someone look over my resume and give their honest opinion and help?

I need help with making my resume the best it can be. I have formatted very good but it wont show how i formatted it on here. So I just need help with the wording, objective, and how to "spice" up what i did at my old jobs. Your answers will be very appreciated and your typing will not go unconsidered. Thx for all the help in advance. OBJECTIVE I seek an opportunity to use my technical skills, education, and work history to communicate in a professional manner, while seeking personal growth and development in a professional and stable environment. QUALIFICATIONS The attributes I possess and feel will aid in a positive result at my work atmosphere are: Reading, writing, computation(60 wpm, Word, PowerPoint, Excel, and Access), Oral communication and listening, Creative thinking and problem solving, personal management (self-esteem, goal setting, motivation, and personal/career development), group effectiveness (interpersonal skills, negotiation, and teamwork), organizational effectiveness and leadership. WORK EXPERIENCE Legacy Concepts Inc. Birmingham, Al Marketer/Leader Feb.2008-May2008 •Created a greater awareness for clients by using a cutting edge promotional marketing method to bring their products and services directly to the community. Instructed new employees on company’s objective and marketing concept, and managed inventory control and incoming funds. Sterilite Corporation Birmingham, Al Inspector Nov.2007-Jan2008 •Examined finished products and determined if they were a suitable finish, packaged and sent finished products down the assembly line, and maintained a stable and clean working environment during 12 hour shifts. Babies R Us Sales Associate Birmingham, Al Mar.2007-June2007 •Helped customers with various question and items within the store. Trained others on product knowledge, selling skills, merchandising standards, and guest service. C&S Wholesale grocers Order Selector Birmingham, Al Jan.2007-Mar2007 •Worked at a fast pace while maintaining accuracy and stability of an order. Updated computer system before and after each order. Constantly lift and stacked over 60 pounds of product. EDUCATION 2005-2007 Alabama A&M University Normal, Al GPA: 2.7 Major: Business Management Minor: Computer Science 2002-2005 Minor High School Birmingham, Al GPA:3.1 ORGANIZATIONS/ACTIVITIES Fund raising for D.A.R.E AMERICA, And Student Government Association

Asked By: jeremyd432 - 1/20/2009
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Your work history shows that you don't stay long at any job... which is not always a good thing!
Answered By: Sasha M - 1/20/2009
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That my be true Sasha, but its not like he can change that... More
Answered By: Rebbecca D - 1/20/2009
Although the objective is fine - many employers don't care if there's an objective or not. I would remove it altogether... More
Answered By: the dorkney - 1/21/2009
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