Why Im failed to all positions even part time job, I dont have chance to get interview, because of resume?

Betat Lee 111 E Grand 111-111-1111 Springfield, MO, 61111 OBJECTIVE Interested in an internship allowing creativity, leadership, troubleshooting, analytical, and organizational skills in a business office environment EDUCATION Master Degree of Accounting Expected Graduation: August 2011 Missouri State University — Springfield, MO, USA Bachelor of Science, General Business May 2009 Liaoning Normal University – Dalian, Liaoning, China GPA: 3.7/4.0 Missouri State University – Dalian Campus Trainee, Foreign Exchange Corporation Jun.2009—Jul. 2009 •Receiving training in foreign exchange •Learned techniques to analyze EXPERIENCE Internship—Bank of China, Chaoyang, Liaoning, China Dec.2008—Mar.2009 •Verified receipt of daily mails and interacted with supervisor regarding processing errors Self-employed—Dalian, Liaoning, China •Generated and managed 20 loyal clients Jun.2006—May 2009 •Trained 12 employees •Promoted products to meet different needs •Created and developed ideas for services to offer to freshmen Associate—Ping An Insurance Group, Dalian, Liaoning, China May2008—Aug.2008 •Called potential clients to promote company •Scheduled appointments for clients come from different locations CAMPUS INVOLVEMENT Tutor—Student Government, Liaoning Normal University, Liaoning, China Fall 2006 •Tutored and encouraged underachieving students toward success Planner—Student Government, Liaoning Normal University, Liaoning, China Summer 2007—Fall 2008 •Organized events for freshmen HONORS •Student Life Achievement Award for students who make contribution to campus activities Fall 2006 •Received the second honor award, based on GPA:3.5 and higher 2005—2006 •Excellent Study Scholarship, chosen out of 100 students, based on GPA and involvement Spring 2009 •Missouri Outreach Graduate Opportunity Scholarship, based on GPA and GMAT Fall 2009 LANGUAGE / COMPUTER •Chinese (Mandarin): First Language •Wenzhou Patois: Experienced •English: Coversational •Performed basic functions in Dreamweaver, Adobe Photoshop and Outlook •Proficiency in MS word, Excel and PowerPoint •Experienced in Research on the Internet Organization •Student Government Oct.2005—Sep.2009 •Students In Free Enterprise (SIFE) Sep. 2009—Present •Siemens Solar Energy Sep. 2009—Present •Financial Management Association Sep. 2009—Present Tell me your ideas regarding this resume, I am open to all opinions, help me improve it. And does it look like fake? If yes, where and why? Sorry about the format....

Asked By: Betat - 11/21/2009
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Your resume is waaaay too scattered and confusing. Condense it and consolidate the most important parts of each section. It should be no more than a page in length. An employer should be able to pick it up and scan it and get everything they need in 10-15 seconds .
Answered By: Linus Caldwell Junior Varsity - 11/21/2009
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