What do you think of this? *please read* :)?

Ok so its a little long but Please read it :) Just to let you know, im only 13 years old x Here it is: There once was a boy who never knew love, but that had been what he'd always dreamed of. Having a friend there to care and to have someone for secrets to share.there was a part of his life that he couldn't tell, because no one would believe it could be worse than hell. "Oi fat boy, go on a diet!" are the things they used to shout, everyday, outside by the roundabout. but they obviously didn't know, how it hurt him so that's why they did not understand when he had to go. you see it was just to much to bare, how his life was so unfair. so he picked up a pen and wrote sorry mum on a piece of paper that he left on the living room floor and before he knew where he was going he ran out of the front door. in a matter of minutes the boy was lost and for this confusion his life was the cost. he didn't see it coming until it was too late, or maybe it was fate. the ambulance arrived pronounced dead at the scene, how good his life could have been. at his funeral there went many there, apart from the mum protesting to the vicor just how it wasn't fair. the mum bent down and placed 7 white roses on his coffin, one for every year, she then said, for a few years now i have missed his laughter, when will my family get its happily ever after?

Asked By: - 2/9/2010
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Oh, that's so sad, but I like it. It's cool how it rhymed. Some parts in the beginning were a little hard to understand. But the shocker for me was the end when I found out his age. =] good job [=
Answered By: Beth - 2/9/2010
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Not a bad poem, I'd say. His age really surprised me. It's hard to believe that a 7 year old could be capable of such things. I give it an 8.
Answered By: The Tenebrous Crow - 2/9/2010
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