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Dream Come True. During his time in education, Adam lacked motivation and the self-esteem to learn in some of the more chalk and board style lessons i.e. Science, English and Religious Education the lack of commitment lead him to losing his concentration and causing disruption within the class. Adam engaged in the more practical and interesting subjects like ICT and Business Studies as a result of this he gained A-C GCSE’s in these subjects. After leaving school Adam started on a 6 month IT computer course at Zenos in Wakefield, which he enjoyed a lot but as it was a short course, Adam completed it with no motivation to progress. This then lead him to spending 6 months at home with no commitment to his future and given a community sentence by the Youth Offending Team for using excessive violence which made him lose direction of his life. Adam had the idea that he could enrol on an e2e (entry to employment) course at Barnsley College just for the money (EMA) but this mentality soon changed when he was referred to the Youth Development for a work placement, 7 months ago Adam had a low self-esteem, no confidence and no motivation so Mark Garside (Chief Operational Officer) let him settle in and gradually increasing his work load in hope of helping Adam feel more comfortable and become more confident. Mark could see the potential that Adam and had a conversation with Adam. Adam told Mark he wanted to run his own business and thought it was impossible Mark assured him that he will help him make his dream come true if only Adam would work with him and changed his lifestyle. The Youth Development found out how talented Adam is with computers by setting him various tasks i.e. creating a website for the Youth Development. The Youth Development increased Adam’s skills to make him become a talented web designer as well as helping him research and build up his own business called Community Computer Solutions Yorkshire (CCSY). With the funding from the Prince’s Trust and the support of The Youth Development CCSY is a non for profit organisation that will support 40% of benefit claimants of which don’t have regular access to a computer to progress them by building web profiles, writing CV’s and having regular sessions to teach them the basics of how to use a computer as well as recycling and refurbishing computers to sell at a affordable price (As they cant afford retail). Adams confidence has now increased and he has the direction of becoming a successful business man who has recently got his first business opportunity by designing a website for Barnsley Community Build which has got his company of the ground. We are all very proud of Adam and what he has achieved during his time at the Youth Development and the Youth Development support CCSY and Adam all the way. please help me out by telling me what words to change as well as giving me so strong constructive criticism

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