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Education Penn Foster
Scranton, PA 18515-0001
Electrician program in progress
Seneca College of Applied Arts and Technology
Major: Industrial Maintenance Mechanic Electricity and Electronic
College of Arts Science and Technology
Major: Mechanical Engineer Technician
Related Work 1998-2010
Prestige Window Fashions
195 Raritan Center Parkway, Edison, New Jersey
Worked as an Industrial Maintenance Mechanic. I performed electrical installation and repaired on the building and machineries. Trouble shooting and repairs blind making machines such as, Sani, Faber, Turnils, and Hunter Douglas high speed strapping machines, sewing machine, automation machines and drill presses. Dismantled, rebuilt and installed high speed production machines, electric motors, compressors, pumps, pneumatic and hydraulic presses and compacters. Designed and built replacements parts for specialty tools and machines. Conducted milling, lathing, boring, welding (gas, arc, mig, tig) and soldering. Set up maintenance program to minimizing production down time. Performed wiring and installation of electrical circuits and panels, receptacles, switches, boxes, conducts, cable assemblies and lighting fixtures. Repair and performed preventatives Maintenance on machines and equipments. Work from blueprints schematics and work drawings. Ensure that machines removed for repairs work are done to specifications and within time and budget. Make request for purchases of parts for repairs and services of machines as needed.
Otema Interior Fixtures
Employed as an Industrial Maintenance Mechanic. Trouble shoot and repair faulty electrical and mechanical equipment. Rebuilt pneumatic and hydraulic equipment compressors, pumps, motors. Operate milling, boring and lathe machines. Perform welding (gas, arc, mig and tig) and soldering. Repair glass cutting machine , table saws ,drill presses, dust collectors, and bending machines. Work from working, drawing, blueprint, schematics. Perform layout and fabrication of metal doors, rails and metal furniture’s. Order parts for machine repairs as needed.
Honor Seneca College Honor graduate
Achievement Prestige Window Fashion Employee of the Year
ReferencesReferences are available on request.
Asked By: carol - 7/25/2010
First off you should list some dates for your education, the year you graduated is usually fine. You also do not need to type out the word 'Major', just listing it underneath the college/schools name will suffice. If you graduated and recieve a degree, diploma or technical certificate, it should say 'Bachelors in/of________' or 'Associates of/in_________' or 'Technical Certificate/License in ___________'
Also, most employers will probably skip right over you with the laundry list of your responsibilities you have under you work experience. Cut it down, especially the first one. Use bullet points to list 6-10 responsibilities and/or accomplishments at each place of employment, things that will be interesting to the company/job you are applying for. 'Prestige Window Fashion Employee of the Year' should be listed under the list of responsibilities for that job. You also do not need to list the companies' full address, just city and state is enough.
You should have a header that says 'Achievements' (Like the 'Related Work' and 'Education' ) and list the 'Seneca College Honor Graduate' under that. Related Work should really be titled 'Experience'. Look up some examples of resumes online for your spacing, I'm not sure if this exactly how it's spaced on your computer but it's kind of cluttered looking on here.
Answered By: junior_minty2 - 7/25/2010