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" There were times when my family relied on me to surmount language barrier since I was a big sister. I did various things from ordering food at El Pollo Loco to speaking with a T-Mobile guy. Often, I felt it was unfair, as my brother and sister would never have to do these jobs. I solaced myself that these were responsibilities and duties that an oldest child should confront rather than allow myself to look on them as a burden."
Asked By: Toy C - 10/27/2011
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Makes sense, flows well "surmount [the] language barrier" would make the grammar perfect there.
Answered By: T-Rex - 10/27/2011
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Toy C You have your own life too, and you are entitled to make the best of the only shit you are given. Sure we must be responsible to help our Mother and our Father, but beyond that seems like it is prohibiting you from being the best you can be. regards Bri
Answered By: Thomas - 10/27/2011
I agree with T-Rex. It flows very well and makes sense. Insert [the] as he suggests. You should also use [consoled] in place of [solaced] .
Answered By: G K - 10/27/2011
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