I am French is it correct?

I am French, is it correct to write that please ? "He was summoned to Moscow where he was hired to design radios to help locate missing submarines. then after his death, the theremin was developped by an American industry called Moog (famous brand of synthezisers) and was got back by electronic music in the early seventies and bands like XX ou ZZ" thanks a lot !!

Asked By: Cha - 11/11/2011
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Erik VT did a wonderful job. I just wanted to point out that "ou" should be replaced by "or" as in "XX or ZZ" at the end of that paragraph. It's always the easy ones that get us, eh? ;-)
Answered By: HDS - 11/11/2011
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"He was summoned to Moscow, where he was hired to design radios to help locate missing submarines. Then, after his death, the theremin was further developed by American engineer Robert Moog (who started Moog Music, a famous brand of synthesizers), and was used again in electronic music during the early seventies, and... More
Answered By: Erik Van Thienen - 11/11/2011
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