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this is a body paragraph and is describes the critical recognition of the film Lawrence of arabia Many critics believe that Lawrence of Arabia is an excellent film and that is shown through their positive reviews. This film was not fully understood and appreciated when it was first released in 1962. A movie critic from the New York Times in a review once said that “Lawrence of Arabia is, awe-inspiring, beautiful, with ever-changing hues, and barren of humanity” (Bosley). This film was appreciated more by the older generation at the time, so the younger generation would have to grow into loving this film. The younger generation may have an issue with this film because of the heavy accents, extreme length in time, and the confusing plot. in another New Your Times review and was initially labeled Lawrence of Arabia a “camel opera,” this was a derogatory term, used to put down the film. Later the movie received a new review from the same newspaper with a more positive review. T.E. Lawrence has been described as a shameless exhibitionist. Indeed Lawrence of Arabia has received negative criticism, but has received more positive. This is an instance where the positive outweighs the negative.

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First off, great job on your research! You have some good information in this paragraph. However, there are some things that need fixing. (I'd suggest going to someone in person, though, for better help). Try eliminating some of your redundancies. For example, if you say that a critic's comment was derogatory, you... More
Answered By: emiliaana - 4/24/2012
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