Can someone please evaluate my resume and give some tips for improvement?

I have updated my resume and need someone to evaluate it. Please tell me if there is anything wrong with it and give me some tips for improvement. Also,please tell me where can I add references in my resume and in what format. Following is my resume: KRIPA SHARMA Address Contact number Email id CAREER OBJECTIVE To work in an organization where I can employ my skills to contribute in the growth of the organization, perpetually honing my skills. EDUCATIONAL QUALIFICATIONS Year 2012: Pursuing Post Graduate Diploma in Business Administration (HR) from XYZ University, ABC city Year 2006: Class 12 from XYZ School Year 2003: Class 10 from XYZ School, AbC city,ABC city PROFESSIONAL QUALIFICATIONS Year 2007: Industrial Training in a four store hotel “name of the hotel", abc city Year 2006: Diploma in aviation and hospitality management from XYZ institute. WORK EXPERIENCE December’11-Till Date Freelance Personality Development and Communication Skills Trainer Holding sessions on request for school and college students training them on the following: •Personality Development •Communication Skills- Spoken English & Grammar •Confidence building •Positive Attitude •Interview Preparation September’11-November’11 Organization, place Personality Development Trainer Held two months Personality Development session at XYZ college, place’. Job responsibilities •Training final year students on personality development- Confidence building Communication skills Positive attitude •Training students on interview skills •Carrying out performance assessments to determine the skills gaps between current and desirable learner skill levels February’10- September’1 1 Organization Student Adviser Job responsibilities •Guiding students in choosing appropriate course of study in New Zealand •Dealing with New Zealand Universities and colleges for student admissions •Arranging accommodation for the students in New Zealand •Handling the students and universities/colleges admissions related queries. May’09 - January’10 Organiation Spoken English & IELTS Trainer Job responsibilities •Designing training programs appropriate to the level of the students and the skills needed •Training students on spoken English skills •Preparing them to appear for English Language Testing System (IELTS) •Personality development training ADDITIONAL DETAILS Date of Birth : DD/MM/YYY Nationality : Indian Marital Status : Unmarried Father’s Name : ABC Languages spoken : English, Hindi, Punjabi Signature:

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Your career objective should be more specific and should mention what job you are applying for. Add a summary section just under the objective and list 3-4 of your top skills and experience within this summary section.
Answered By: Tony - 7/30/2012
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Good for you!
Answered By: ASDF - 7/29/2012
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