Can someone revise my cover letter(motivation letter) applying for a Ph.D position?urgent?

I am writing to express my great interest in apply for the PhD position in ...... as announced on at Department of....... As a MS.c of...........graduate and have a keen interest in ............ I am looking forward to applying my skills in a practical setting. I have enjoyed the fieldwork component of my degree immensely and am keen to work in diverse and remote locations.I consider that my credentials and interests absolutely matches with your requirement and want to apply for the position and I believe I am the one who has the skill set and the experience you’re looking for. I graduate from a reputable university in ......... and have experience in .......... and ....... for the last three years, working with other Engineers with the everyday jobs and responsibilities focusing on finding, Engineering properties of...., in ... testing and laboratory tests, of .... and ... in underground processes.I am able to clearly communicate and collaborate with senior staff and effectively draw on my level knowledge of ........ During my time as Master of science student I were a highly motivated In ....mechanics and my major and really like to mix my computer knowledge with my field of study, I used computer and Internet frequently to search and solve any problem in my mind.I do my research for my ms.c thesis working on .... of ... during that time I do work in laboratory and carry out ... testing on rocks and found myself really love working in the field like drilling, in testing and full time research in my major. My skills include a good working knowledge of programs such as ... package(/) ,CorelDraw Graphics Suite X4, Adobe CS5, Microsoft Office package, ... and .... 14(familiar with) and the SPSS 16, IT, Internet, I am interested in computer science and I pass some free online courses and learn to design a website using HTML, javascript codes and also have experience working as IT manager and Internet administration Good knowledge in computer even programming (familiar with HTML, javascript, C, C++, ), Matlab. I always had dream of studying computer science as my second major i hope it come true someday! Through my previous work in hospitality, I have gained excellent communication and interpersonal skills.I have learnt how to motivate team members to work toward goals and also to collaborate effectively with a diverse range of people that’s why My communication and interpersonal skills are excellent. more importantly, I develop strong interpersonal skills from working closely with many people with different backgrounds, both in academic and industry. In addition, during my undergraduate studies till now I always were highly motivated to learn and teach foreign language such as english language and ... , I have more that seven years of experiences in English language studying and teaching and have got 110 in TOEFL ibt exam (testing) and it has been expired and I'm preparing to take Next TOEFL and GRE exam. I am keen to apply my skills, while building on my ... experience and undertaking additional training and development. My experiences have allowed me to develop a unique combination of communication skills along with machinery and technical experience, and I believe I could make a valuable contribution to your team.You may be interviewing other potential applicants but I hope you will not make a final decision until I can talk over this job with you and show you want I can bring to it. Please call me on my cell phone: (+0)-00000000and also Email me at: to set up an interview at your convenience if you’d like to talk to me.I feel that I am a strong candidate for this position due to my field of study, and my genuine passion for..... I owe you dual thanks. First, for taking your valuable time to reading and considering my Application letter and second, for giving this great opportunity to those student who love their major like me. I’m looking forward to meeting you Sincerely Yours, me

Asked By: Anonymous - 10/30/2012
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Answered By: MeL - 10/30/2012
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Sorry, but your cover letter is WAY, WAY too long. And do you know what? I couldn't even be bothered to read it all myself. Take a good hint from that sentence. If I were interviewing and got a cover letter like that, I would be bored stiff in the first paragraph... More
Answered By: Derob - 10/30/2012
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Answered By: Alfakesh - 10/30/2012
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